Today we went to MOTAT-{Museum of transport and technology it was absolutely amazing we had so much fun. We saw a lot e.g old original boiler room, all different types of cameras from then and now, products from ages ago
I like the way you used the words (absolutely amazing) they are very amazing words to describe something . I think next time you can try to make you blog post more descriptive because it was really interesting and I wanted to read more about your day . I also like how you use more complexed punctuation in you blog post . From Nisita
I liked how you added what MOTAT meant and sme of the things you saw. Like Nisita, maybe you should add more and a but more descriptive. It was really interesting though.
To Margaret
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used the words (absolutely amazing) they are very amazing words to describe something .
I think next time you can try to make you blog post more descriptive because it was really interesting and I wanted to read more about your day .
I also like how you use more complexed punctuation in you blog post .
From Nisita
Hi Margaret
ReplyDeleteI liked how you added what MOTAT meant and sme of the things you saw. Like Nisita, maybe you should add more and a but more descriptive. It was really interesting though.
Jasmine👍🏻